Hey Liv - well done on getting your idea to this stage on time and with such confidence. You're in a strong position now to move into the last two weeks very productively. I left some feedback previously re. inserting an additional establishing shot of the classroom into the opening shots and I also have a suggestion that in your final shot where you've got the boy smiling and eating his cake, perhaps we should also see him opening his chemistry book too and getting down to read again - perhaps he can push his glasses back up his nose in preparation? Otherwise, you're good to go - so go!
OGR 07/02/2019
ReplyDeleteHey Liv - well done on getting your idea to this stage on time and with such confidence. You're in a strong position now to move into the last two weeks very productively. I left some feedback previously re. inserting an additional establishing shot of the classroom into the opening shots and I also have a suggestion that in your final shot where you've got the boy smiling and eating his cake, perhaps we should also see him opening his chemistry book too and getting down to read again - perhaps he can push his glasses back up his nose in preparation? Otherwise, you're good to go - so go!