A thoughtful review, Olivia :) Just a couple of things...make sure that you always include the date in the in-text citation (one of the Bullock ones is missing - this is important if you are using material from the same author but different sources). Also, you only need the surname, so not Paul Bullock. One final thing - you should use the rounded brackets rather than the square ones for the in-text citation... I'm not sure if it would make a difference to the Turnitin, but best be on the safe side!
A thoughtful review, Olivia :)
ReplyDeleteJust a couple of things...make sure that you always include the date in the in-text citation (one of the Bullock ones is missing - this is important if you are using material from the same author but different sources). Also, you only need the surname, so not Paul Bullock.
One final thing - you should use the rounded brackets rather than the square ones for the in-text citation... I'm not sure if it would make a difference to the Turnitin, but best be on the safe side!