Hey Liv - l like the crisp focus of this review - shows you've listened to the advice and applied it. It gives your writing an authoritative and confident tone. Just think about the advice too around introductions: your's isn't quite as technically on message as it might have been; you state what the review is going to do, but next you should introduce your key sources and why you're using them, so you'd want to reference Fordor as a key source, for example.
Hey Liv - l like the crisp focus of this review - shows you've listened to the advice and applied it. It gives your writing an authoritative and confident tone. Just think about the advice too around introductions: your's isn't quite as technically on message as it might have been; you state what the review is going to do, but next you should introduce your key sources and why you're using them, so you'd want to reference Fordor as a key source, for example.
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